This week is the final deadline to finish all our production and post-production work. me and my partner have done a lot of editing the clips like changing the lengths and choosing the best shots. We decided to change the voice actor for the voiceover in our library scenes, because the original actor's voice didn't sound serious enough and didn't express enough anger to match with the actor's facial expressions on screen. We also re-shot the whole library scene the same day and make a whole different range of shots. The original table we used was taken so we had to find a different seat. We found one by the window so the shots looked really bright on camera, so we adjusted the brightness to see the character better. We managed to get as many different shots possible from different angles.
Me and my partner have decided to change the order of the two scenes in the film by having the library scene before the park scene, based on my teacher's feedback. We did this so the story is denoted more easily to the audience. The audience can understand who the character is and what the film is about which gives a greater impact on the park scene. This still creates enigma as the audience doesn't know where the character is going and why, but they can understand the character a bit better from the previous scene. We also changed the protagonist's name from Ben to "Zakir" as we felt this represents the character more and is more realistic to his ethnicity.
Another slight thing we changed was the production logo. My teacher told me and my partner that "Concrete Corporations" shouldn't have an "s" at the end so we had to edit that letter out. However the problem was that at the time we done this using photoshop we forgot the save the PSD file so we had to create it again. We only saved it as a jpeg file but that cannot be edited. Unfortunately we were unable to find the same font we used at first which everyone have said they really liked, so we had to do with an alternative which looked similar but not quite the same and not as good as the original. Me and my partner know now that we should always save our work even after we finished it as it can still be useful in the future.
